Conrad Rice

This was a very good piece. I have to admit that I'm not very good with stream of consciousness, but I will try my best. The piece did flow together, ...

Well, Ky, first off I have to say that I'm not really a fan of stream of consciousness, mostly because the only exposure I've had to it is "Catcher in ...

Well, I'm sorry to say that you don't get a nice little document to download this time. Why? It's not because I've grown to dislike you, Ky. It's simply because ...

This is a very interesting way to tell a story, Jared. It works very well too. Is there any particular reason that you repeated the first two messages at the ...

This is not a bad piece, Jared. It works very nicely as a religious poem. Bear in mind that I haven't read Kylan's contest, so I have no idea what ...

Here's my critique, nice and prompt as always. :) I have to thank you again for helping me with my story. I can only hope that the help I am ...

Well, all in all I found this story to be a very tightly knit together piece. You allowed us to get into Riley's head very well, helping us to identify ...

Here's my review for your story. I swear, Ky, you're going to have to start messing up again. You do many more good chapters like this and I'll be out ...

Here's my review, Kylan, faithful as always. I have to give you major kudos for carrying on a story like this. It is incredibly risky, but never once have you ...

Here's my review. Sorry it's so late. By the way, I mentioned that I would take a review of a story in return for my help. I've posted it up ...

Well, this was a nice little piece. I liked Leila, though she seemed a bit uncomfortable at first, after it became apparent she was an immigrant it felt essential to ...

Very good, canis. I can only spot a few things that don't look quite right, so I'll pick at them and then get out of your hair. My mother stood ...

The first question I have to ask is, how is this story a science fiction story? There don't seem to be any parts of it that involve a scientific aspect. ...

Wow, awesome amazing metaphor here! I have to give you mad props for it. :) I agree with the above review on expressing the thoughts and fears of the main ...

A very interesting story, to be sure. I can't see any grammar problems, but I don't really look for those, so whatever. What I did see was that I had ...